Journal 4

In class, everyone kept a journal of their study English writting every week.
We can saw that on internet.
I think I have many abusage in my journal.
Teacher told me where wrong is it.
I felt so great!
Beacause nobady tell me that I use wrong grammar in the past time.
Thanks!

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在課堂上，每個禮拜大家都要寫一篇關於英文寫坐的學習日誌。
我們可以透過網路看到大家的作品。
我想我有很多文法上的錯誤。
老師上課時告訴我哪邊寫的不好。
感覺真棒！
因為從來沒有人可以正確告訴我到底哪邊的語句是不好的、不能用的。
謝謝！